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Cartoon Midnight
            Ready?  Welcome  to  our cartoon  journey  to  the  bewitching  instant  when  night  is
      not  night  and  night  is  not  morning,  a  suspended  instant between--a  point  out  of  time, a
      Cartoon Midnight.
            A  moment  not  unlike  the  lives  of  these  developing  writers--lives  moving  toward
      morning  ("Reality,"  "The  Real  World")--leaving  behind  the  comfort  of  fairy  tales  and
      innocent  hopes  ("The  magic  carpet  rides  of  Aladdin  are  no  longer"  [Sunshine  Brazell]).
      Their  writing  burgeons  with  fear  and  questions  ("What  is  the  real  color?"  Where  is  my
      place?"  [Antwan  Perez]  "Who knows who I am?  [Gena McGinnes])
            Cartoon  Midnight  gives  a  voice  to  the  unvoiced,  to  those  who  feel  "my  words
      rang  out  like  a bell,  but  never  reached  anyone"  (Stephanie  Huckins), those  who  have  felt
      their words "were insignificant" (Oscar Lopez).
            There  is,  of  course,  a  natural  anxiety  that  comes  with  coming of age  -- the
      pressure  of  what  Oliver  Khoshaba  calls  "complicated  complications,"  real  life  factors--
      family  life,  finances,  safety,  drugs,  motherhood/fatherhood,  career,  love  and  belonging)
      are  suddenly  converging  upon  them .   Some  rail  against  the  standardization,
      impersonalization,  and helplessness.  They feel  as  if they  might be  the  ones  trapped in  a
      cartoon.   Combine  this  with  transient  personal  lives  in  a  rapidly  changing  society,  is  it
      any  wonder Oscar Lopez wrote:  "I  feel  no solidity of structure"  and  Jamie  Smith  spoke  of
      "waiting to blink."
            The  longing  for  escape  from  these  pressures  to  fly  into  a predictable  "Cartoon
      Midnight"  (Lindsey  Krutak)  or  be  transformed  ("Flesh  to  Metal"  Clif  Crotts)  is
      natural and logical.
            This  language  cartoon  does  have  its  moments  of  relief,  islands  of  tranquillity
      ("Serene  Boredom"  Brian  Preece  and  "Peacefully  Set,"  Eric  Porter.)  But  when  all  is
      said and done, the poets seem to say it best:
                             "I  walk a path of life unknown
                              to life itself." (Anthony Williams)
            I'd  like  to  thank  the  Bowman  staff  and  principal  for  their  encouragement  and
      support.  These  poems  are  primarily  an  outgrowth  of the  Spring  94  and  the  Fall/Spring
      1994/95  Creative  Writing  classes.   Special  thanks  is  extended  to  instructional
      assistant,  Joy  Williamson,  whose  diligent  and  outstanding  work  helped  make  this
      publication a reality.

            It  is  particularly  gratifying  for  me  to  witness  students  acknowledging  the
      importance  of the  voice  within,  honoring  speech  while  gaining  respect  and  knowledge  of
      the poetic idiom.

            I'm  grateful  for  the  opportunity  I  had  to  work  with  these  writers,  hear  their
      unique expressions and see their individual development.
                                                                Richard Weekley
                                  Bulldog Publications
                                 Bowman High School
                                  21508 Redview Drive
                                 Santa Clarita, CA 91350

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